Thursday, February 17, 2011

Poem 93 - Seventh Heaven Walk


I was walking around the town humming a song
What a beautiful day nothing had gone wrong
A peaceful day, birds chirped as they sat in their nest
People smiled they were lazy and were having a rest

I was content with life I walked on
In a lake far away I saw many a swan
I went towards the lake crossed the lilies of the fields
I saw a man lazily sowing some seeds

The lake made a lapping noise quietly
I threw bread at the swans they looked at me
Quickly each grabbed some bread
Oh! What a beautiful morning" I said

I went back humming again
I passed another field full of sugarcane
Sweet fragrances filled the air
Oh with you this morning I will like to share
-Gaurang Rao


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15 comments:

  1. JudieFebruary 17, 2011 at 11:10 PM

    A lovely poem! Thanks for sharing it wuth us!

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  2. kelvin s.m.February 17, 2011 at 11:29 PM

    ..another positive and soothing verses from Gaurang... keep the blessings alive!!!^^ God Bless!!!^^

    ~Kelvin

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  3. Brother OllieFebruary 18, 2011 at 12:06 AM

    Musical...Amen GP.

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  4. CherylFebruary 18, 2011 at 12:32 AM

    Soothing and quieting. Simply lovely.

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  5. RNSANEFebruary 18, 2011 at 1:42 AM

    This was a very lovely poem. I also wrote poetry but I am afraid my life is in turmoil rigt now.

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  6. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 18, 2011 at 2:10 AM

    super beautiful.
    love it.
    :)

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  7. Lisa H.February 18, 2011 at 2:11 AM

    What a beautiful poem. You guided me see the beauty just through your words. Thank you.

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  8. DonnieFebruary 18, 2011 at 3:20 AM

    Very pretty.

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  9. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 18, 2011 at 7:21 AM

    It snowed here today, so I very much enjoyed walking through your springtime:)

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  10. EllaFebruary 18, 2011 at 7:30 AM

    Thanks for sharing, it was peaceful and beautiful~

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  11. signed...bkmFebruary 18, 2011 at 9:38 AM

    Lovely you can smell the fragances in the air...bkm

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  12. eyeographyFebruary 18, 2011 at 10:29 AM

    what a beautiful scenario you have presented with your wonderful poem...lovely :)

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  13. UnknownFebruary 18, 2011 at 5:39 PM

    So beautiful... I love it!

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  14. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 18, 2011 at 10:23 PM

    Greetings, how are you?
    Your absence is missed, hope you well…
    Write a free verse 4 Poets Rally, enjoy poetic friends, you are invited!

    Hope to see you in,

    Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.

    Cheers.
    xoxox

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  15. ScottlBFebruary 19, 2011 at 1:37 AM

    wonderful images brought to mind with your poem, Thanks for sharing

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