Wednesday, February 9, 2011

Poem 84 - Dentist Time!!


Have a tooth pain, mom tells we need to go to the dentist
I keep screaming 'No!' but the pain I can't hold
Finally I followed her to the dental clinic
I feel more uneasy as the clock does tick

A scream came from behind the door
I got scared even more and more
My head now becomes really very sweaty
Nurse comes and says "Next" pointing at me

I start to cry in pain and fear
Knowing now my time was more than near
Nurse pushed me inside the room
Oh No! I was going to see my doom

Dentist looking like an evil monster
Was he going to be my tooth doctor?!
Evil teeth, injection in one hand
He took a spray from the stand

I closed my eyes, sat on the chair
Oh God! This was worse than a nightmare
Slowly I opened my eyes
My tooth had gone. No lies!

Wow it really didn't pain!
But money the dentist did gain
I thanked him as I went away
Knowing that I would be back one more day
-Gaurang Rao

9 comments:

  1. Even though the dentist looked like an evil monster he turned into a good one relieving pain!

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  2. I clicked your link on "Monday's Child" It lead me here. What has this poem got to do with bkm's prompt?

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  3. I know Dentist time,
    what a brave take.

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  4. We all hate the dentist, but he/she is an essential part of our health care. I go regularly simply out of fear of losing my teeth!

    Leslie
    ABCW Team

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  5. never like going to the dds myself. nice story/
    ROG, ABC Wednesday team

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  6. How it looks and sounds is worse than what it is for lots of things. I like the way you told your story in rhyme. That's hard to do.

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