One morning puss in boots was putting his clothes on the line
The morning was windy but it was still just fine
A map came from nowhere and hit puss's head lightly
Quickly Puss held the map very tightly
It looked like a very old treasure map
He decided to find out he put on his black cap
He followed the route many friends joined puss
Over the map, all of them made a big fuss
Finally they found out the map was fake
It was when they all fell in the lake
There was really no treasure
There was no gold or silver to measure
-Gaurang Rao
Written for - http://mellowyellowmonday.blogspot.com/
and - http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com
Nice!
ReplyDeleteMy Mellow Yellow
Fun read! :)
ReplyDeletenice! here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/29/cinderella-for-a-man/
ReplyDeleteNice.Keep going!
ReplyDeletelovely story in cartoon.
ReplyDeletewell penned.
A++
Wonderful pic and poem, the dreams of many, to find the hidden treasure. Not always physical objects, but, inner awareness!
ReplyDeleteAaaw- no treasure.. :(
ReplyDeleteThis one is a nice little children's poem I guess- oh yes! you have written it there!
Wonderful one.. I like the blog template so lit n bright.. :)
Love xox
http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2011/02/28/virtuality/
You amaze me, Gaurang. Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteWell penned tale, wrapped up on the map like a poem. Maybe this is the buried treasure.
ReplyDeleteNow thats a very nice story, here's mine thanks My Daily Mumbles
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful job on this prompt....very nice...thank you...bkm
ReplyDeleteWonderful , I loved it! :o)
ReplyDeleteAww.. I feel sad for Puss and gang... but that's waht greed does to one I guess...
ReplyDeleteSo well written, Gaurang.. with a superb message too!
Best wishes!!
This was a lot of fun, nice twist!
ReplyDeletesadness is smartly crafted in a lovely story.
ReplyDeletekeep it up.
Charming as always. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteDelightful poem! Well-written. I could not get this story to rhyme, so I wrote a simple prose text!
ReplyDeleteBest wishes,
Anna
Anna's Monday's Child #35