Was walking on an empty piece of land
Not simply, I was sent on an errand
I the warrior had to catch the great fire bird
But nobody I feared
Ah! Resting was the mighty thing
Seemed to have a fiery wing
Saw me opened it's mouth to blow fire
I quickly jumped and hung on an electric wire
It made a black spot in the empty ground
From his mouth came an angry sound
The Bird really roared
Made me take out my sword
The sounds made me think it was a dragon
Sent from the god of the sun
Really it almost burnt my armor
To fight, my mind did usher
And guess what I captured it
After I got many a hit
I just tricked him by sitting lightly on a dug up hole
In a minute he was inside looking like burning coal
I took him back to my boss
This time with me he wasn't cross
In fact he gave me a trophy
He finally awarded me
-Gaurang Rao
Good story...no fantastic story.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely amazing writing! You are going to be a published author one day:) Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteA nicely woven tale and the rhyming is smooth.
ReplyDeletePamela
A captivating tale within a poem....i love it!
ReplyDelete:-)
I love the story within, the boundaries you pushed through!~ Well Done, has a nice flow~
ReplyDeleteI loved your story. :-)
ReplyDeleteGaurang,
ReplyDeleteAn amazing piece of warm and fire filled writing!
I enjoyed this very much.
Best wishes, Eileen