Sunday, January 2, 2011

Poem 57 - Witnessing a football match


Our school football team had made progress
The other team still seemed to be in a mess
Well maybe the other team didn't practice
But still this match I didn't want to miss

And of course our team did win the game
Actually always it is the exact same
The only thing is that the team is different
But always we win and the other team is silent
-Gaurang Rao






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16 comments:

  1. aishaJanuary 2, 2011 at 9:13 PM

    nice keep writing gaurang darling

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 3, 2011 at 6:11 AM

    best wishes on sports progress.

    lovely poetry, masterful job.

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 3, 2011 at 9:08 PM

    welcome to Poets Rally Week 36, I placed your link in, love the image and wording on this piece.

    keep it up.
    Happy Rally....

    let me know after you are done 18 commenting...

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  4. NankaJanuary 4, 2011 at 12:11 AM

    Nice work Gaurang!!
    Keep it up and you did bring a smile on my face :)
    I liked the way you tackled the prompt at LoL!!
    Keep giving us more of this treat!!

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 4, 2011 at 3:34 AM

    Nice and funny:) amazing how you can write a poem about simply anything...

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  6. The Reason You ComeJanuary 4, 2011 at 4:59 AM

    Congratulations to you and your team! :) Btw, I love the music here - Time To Say Goodbye. I find myself lingering on your page to keep listening to it. Happy New Year! ;0

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  7. Travel with Chamz ChamenJanuary 4, 2011 at 3:08 PM

    Cute poem. :)

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  8. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 5, 2011 at 10:12 AM

    It is wonderful to see a grade six student writing poems. It means you are a true Writer. Keep writing!Good work!

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 5, 2011 at 1:05 PM

    wow! never knew football could be penned! nice! mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/14/hunger/

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  10. Lalita SinghJanuary 5, 2011 at 5:23 PM

    Aww!! :) Super Cute! :)

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  11. Uma AnandaneJanuary 5, 2011 at 9:31 PM

    ah!
    simple and sweet!
    Enjoyed :)

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  12. Tess KincaidJanuary 7, 2011 at 1:38 AM

    Yes! Nothing like that team spirit.

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  13. KavitaJanuary 7, 2011 at 2:44 AM

    Oh..awesome!! May this year bring you many more victories, Gaurang!! :)
    Keep up the cool work!

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  14. ReflectionsJanuary 7, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    Awesome post! Great thing this team spirit.

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  15. gautami tripathyJanuary 7, 2011 at 3:35 PM

    Keep writing...

    curtain of pebbled path

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  16. RumyaJanuary 7, 2011 at 7:42 PM

    Excellent team work in your poem! Liked how you tackled the topic, CHANGE. Brought a smile to my face :)

    Thank you for linking in with us at LoL, Gaurang! I do hope you'll join us again this Saturday! :)

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