Sunday, January 2, 2011

Poem 57 - Witnessing a football match


Our school football team had made progress
The other team still seemed to be in a mess
Well maybe the other team didn't practice
But still this match I didn't want to miss

And of course our team did win the game
Actually always it is the exact same
The only thing is that the team is different
But always we win and the other team is silent
-Gaurang Rao






16 comments:

  1. nice keep writing gaurang darling

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  2. best wishes on sports progress.

    lovely poetry, masterful job.

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  3. welcome to Poets Rally Week 36, I placed your link in, love the image and wording on this piece.

    keep it up.
    Happy Rally....

    let me know after you are done 18 commenting...

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  4. Nice work Gaurang!!
    Keep it up and you did bring a smile on my face :)
    I liked the way you tackled the prompt at LoL!!
    Keep giving us more of this treat!!

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  5. Nice and funny:) amazing how you can write a poem about simply anything...

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  6. Congratulations to you and your team! :) Btw, I love the music here - Time To Say Goodbye. I find myself lingering on your page to keep listening to it. Happy New Year! ;0

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  7. It is wonderful to see a grade six student writing poems. It means you are a true Writer. Keep writing!Good work!

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  8. wow! never knew football could be penned! nice! mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/14/hunger/

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  9. ah!
    simple and sweet!
    Enjoyed :)

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  10. Yes! Nothing like that team spirit.

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  11. Oh..awesome!! May this year bring you many more victories, Gaurang!! :)
    Keep up the cool work!

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  12. Awesome post! Great thing this team spirit.

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  13. Excellent team work in your poem! Liked how you tackled the topic, CHANGE. Brought a smile to my face :)

    Thank you for linking in with us at LoL, Gaurang! I do hope you'll join us again this Saturday! :)

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