Thursday, September 12, 2013

Poem 276 - Lost In His World

Image from Magpie Tales

Lost in his world, he did not notice the waiter waiting
So many food items, but had to choose by price
Just a couple of notes in his hand he was clutching
So while choosing he had to be wise

The waiter grinned, looking at the boy lost in confusion
He coughed, to offer his help, but the boy absent-minded, shook his head 
For he wanted to make his own decision
Lost in his world, still the waiters presence, in his thoughts did not spread
~Gaurang Rao

17 comments:

  1. I love your poem, Gaurang! Thanks for sharing your words.

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  2. Great job weaving the two challenges together ............

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  3. His guardian angel, that waiter. I wonder why the boy's eating alone...

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  4. Yes, the boy does indeed look lost in thought. Sometimes decisions are hard.

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  5. nicely and cleverly done Gourang, tying up two prompts....and an interesting storyline...

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  6. Lost in his own world, we have all been there, many times. Very interesting and a nice finish

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  7. Lost in his boy world--good capture of a moment,

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  8. Nikhilgovind ShenoyApril 20, 2014 at 3:38 PM

    Awesome Gaurang, I simply love your poems :3 :)

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