Saturday, September 14, 2013

Poem 278 - River

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Sliding and shining
Tirelessly, river flows
Splashing on its banks

Happily it sings
To the fish in its deep depths
A slow bubbling song

It babbles non-stop
To itself, more than to fish
Under mortal's boats
~Gaurang Rao

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  1. O. T. TippetSeptember 14, 2013 at 1:57 AM

    "Happily it sings…" is my favorite of the three. Thank you for sharing them. As a note, your link on the Haiku Heights post is not working. I would not want the others to miss your contribution!

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  2. Joanne Moceri-TaveiraSeptember 14, 2013 at 3:16 AM

    a gorgeous, flowing set....nicely done....

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  3. kaykualaSeptember 14, 2013 at 7:40 AM

    Happily a free flowing song to accompany the free flowing river! Nicely Gaurang!


    Hank
    P/S Pl check. I could not get through by clicking at your name at HH. I had to go to your blog.

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  4. panchaliSeptember 14, 2013 at 10:34 AM

    I love the second one the most....very beautiful set :)

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  5. NankaSeptember 14, 2013 at 2:44 PM

    Bubbling, babbling, splashing and sliding tirelessly, so apt for a river in full flow!! Loved the haiku sets in its entirety!!

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  6. GaurangSeptember 14, 2013 at 3:20 PM

    Thanks O.T Tippet. I didn't realize it. Changed it now. Thanks for your appreciations also

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  7. GaurangSeptember 14, 2013 at 3:20 PM

    Thanks Kaykuala. Changed it now.

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  8. GaurangSeptember 14, 2013 at 3:20 PM

    Thanks Panchali.

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  9. GaurangSeptember 14, 2013 at 3:21 PM

    Thanks Nanka!

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  10. GaurangSeptember 14, 2013 at 6:25 PM

    Thanks Rajlakshmi!

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  11. Sumana RoySeptember 14, 2013 at 7:35 PM

    it babbles non- stop / to itself.....beautiful.....

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  12. LocomenteSeptember 14, 2013 at 9:47 PM

    So beautiful...
    Loved the 2nd one...
    Nice imagination :)

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  13. GaurangSeptember 14, 2013 at 11:57 PM

    Thansk Locomente!

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  14. One of a ClassSeptember 15, 2013 at 12:44 AM

    I love the songs of the rivers. Nicely done!

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  15. usha menonSeptember 15, 2013 at 3:50 PM

    The fish enjoying the song of the flowing river. Very beautiful indeed.

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  16. GaurangSeptember 15, 2013 at 5:17 PM

    Thanks One Of A Class

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  17. GaurangSeptember 15, 2013 at 5:17 PM

    Thanks Usha

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