Sunday, September 1, 2013

Poem 258 - Frog

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A cute little pond
A statue in the middle
Of a small merman

I hear a soft croak
Coming from near the statue
A small little frog

With shock I stared at
Natures other kind of green
Just croaking away
~Gaurang Rao

Written for - http://haiku-heights.blogspot.in/
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9 comments:

  1. unfetteredbsSeptember 1, 2013 at 9:05 PM

    I love how you have smartly woven the scene with all three but how can stand alone.

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  2. GaurangSeptember 1, 2013 at 9:06 PM

    Thanks unfetteredbs

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  3. NankaSeptember 1, 2013 at 11:00 PM

    That croaking can just mean trouble :) like sleepless nights :)

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  4. GaurangSeptember 1, 2013 at 11:21 PM

    Haha, I agree :D

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  5. siggiofmaineSeptember 2, 2013 at 4:38 AM

    Love it...nice little haiku story☺
    Peace
    Siggi

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  6. Paulo GuimaraesSeptember 2, 2013 at 11:54 AM

    Awesome work! Love the imagery!!

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  7. oneofaclassSeptember 3, 2013 at 12:10 AM

    I like the simple story told by each. Nicely done!

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  8. GaurangSeptember 3, 2013 at 8:26 PM

    Thanks Paulo!

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  9. GaurangSeptember 3, 2013 at 8:26 PM

    Thank u!

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