Monday, March 7, 2011

Poem 108 - Peekaboo!


Peter walks behind Ethan
Ethan suddenly does run
Excitedly Peter follows behind
Keep running properly lined
And suddenly Ethan turns
'Bout Peter he learns
Oh! Peter in shock
Only Ethan does mock
-Gaurang Rao


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  1. NankaMarch 8, 2011 at 7:33 PM

    Gaurang I think you did not read the rules of acrostic's which you have to follow!!
    You have a very creative take for the prompt word here but you missed out on the rules!! :(
    Do talk to Amias and rectify!!
    Cheers!!

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  2. Amanda MooreMarch 9, 2011 at 9:47 PM

    this is very cute almost like a childs bedtime story great writing!

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  3. NankaMarch 13, 2011 at 3:50 PM

    Now you have done it right and perfectly delightful too!!

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  4. RumyaMarch 20, 2011 at 2:58 PM

    Those are two naughty boys I say! :)

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