An empty lane, only a old bench there
If only it was not uneven and jagged
Cars could be driven there
Some noise from vehicles the lane lacked
If only there could be a few more trees
Where birds could chirp and children play
I painted a picture in my head
Hoping the beautiful image would stay
Have a distant look at my mind
No you still can't see what I see
Trees grow, birds chirp, cars stop in the traffic
And there is a more happier me
More beautiful houses, to decorate the lane
I hoped it wouldn't be as silent as it was in this lane
It is always too dark and quiet
But for now the lane was silent, quite, dark and standing in pain
-Gaurang Rao
Written for - http://carryontuesdayprompt.blogspot.com/
Very nice, Gaurang. All our mental paintings need more trees and chirping birds. I'm so pleased to see you rhyming. We who rhyme are becoming rare.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful vision!
ReplyDeleteSounds like a lovely imagined place
ReplyDeleteLiked the picture you painted in you head and well done!!
ReplyDeletelovely painting,
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