Monday, July 18, 2011

Poem 162 - The Masked Secrets

Mask on the wall, looking straight at my eye
Artistic colors, a nice black and white
So creepy, who knows what those eyes lie
Keep distance from those eyes, they glows at night
Ever glowing eyes, with its evil look
Death scaring lips, which carry a wild smile
Slightly white crooked nose, my head I shook
Eek! Is it fake, or a mask that is fragile
Colored spots on the face, they're black and good
Read its unseen mind, what is it thinking?
Evil face it has, does not even eat food
Throw it away, for it is disturbing
Scary mask now gone, its in the garbage
Now I confess I threw it in a rage
-Gaurang Rao


  1. provocative and interesting. nice

  2. Writing an acrostic poem. What a great idea.

  3. The mask would have been easy to visualize even without a picture. Well written. Great description.

  4. That was a great 'read-down'! Loved this format!

  5. I very much enjoyed this masks can be very creepy really anything with an artificial human face lol

  6. Greatly attempted piece fitting in to the words exactly...Superb indeed...


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