River, gently flows
Containing knowledge about
Places its passed through
Oh! A sudden fall
And nature's beauty unveiled
Through a waterfall
Surreal to eyes
As the water falls gently
With a bubbling sound
~Gaurang Rao
Written for - http://haiku-heights.blogspot.in/
Beautiful and so very well worded!! Love the imagery that you have created through your words!!Promise to let you be the first next time!! ;)
ReplyDeleteYou amaze me Gaurang.. well done... lovely images in your words...
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Very true... The flow of words is as amazing as the rivers and waterfalls... Well done!!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful cascade of Haiku, loved the way you have talked about the journey of river and then the waterfall's beauty!
ReplyDeleteThis is really lovely and serene
ReplyDeleteI like the images of the river's journey collecting knowledge. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteNice set! I like the idea of the river's knowledge of where it's been.
ReplyDeleteserene and pleasant haiku! loved them!
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If you'd like to read mine, here it is: Waterfalls.
Your river of words mimic the cascading of the waterfalls! Lovely!
ReplyDeletevery nice and words are flowing like waterfall in the poem -Vandana
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Gaurang - did you remember the waterfall that you had played in when we went on our hike in the Atlas Mountains in Morocco?
ReplyDeletePlaces it goes through, nice mention
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of the river containing knowledge of where it has passed through. I think we humans are like that too. Possibly all of nature is like that. Thanks for the inspiration today.
ReplyDeleteThis is so peaceful and serene ... I loved it !!!
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