Friday, April 26, 2013

Poem 230 - The Waterfall

River, gently flows
Containing knowledge about
Places its passed through

Oh! A sudden fall
And nature's beauty unveiled
Through a waterfall

Surreal to eyes
As the water falls gently
With a bubbling sound
~Gaurang Rao

14 comments:

  1. Beautiful and so very well worded!! Love the imagery that you have created through your words!!Promise to let you be the first next time!! ;)

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  2. You amaze me Gaurang.. well done... lovely images in your words...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/soothing-symphony.html

    RS

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  3. Very true... The flow of words is as amazing as the rivers and waterfalls... Well done!!!

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  4. Beautiful cascade of Haiku, loved the way you have talked about the journey of river and then the waterfall's beauty!

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  5. I like the images of the river's journey collecting knowledge. Very nice.

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  6. Nice set! I like the idea of the river's knowledge of where it's been.

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  7. serene and pleasant haiku! loved them!
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    If you'd like to read mine, here it is: Waterfalls.

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  8. Your river of words mimic the cascading of the waterfalls! Lovely!

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  9. very nice and words are flowing like waterfall in the poem -Vandana

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  10. Beautiful Gaurang - did you remember the waterfall that you had played in when we went on our hike in the Atlas Mountains in Morocco?

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  11. Places it goes through, nice mention

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  12. I like the idea of the river containing knowledge of where it has passed through. I think we humans are like that too. Possibly all of nature is like that. Thanks for the inspiration today.

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  13. This is so peaceful and serene ... I loved it !!!

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