Monday, May 30, 2011

Poem 150 - Sea god angry?


Hungry waves lashing the beach
To drown people, it does reach
Water spraying on people standing far away
Hungrily waiting for people, the sea does lay

Angry sea god, sending the terrifying waves?
Sending water even inside the beach caves
Oh, what a sea - hungry and mean
Drowning people, who were then never seen
-Gaurang Rao

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7 comments:

  1. kelvin s.m.May 30, 2011 at 12:04 PM

    ..great lines Gaurang with so many emotions to raise...the sea indeed could be both handsome and at times terrifying...Brightest blessings to you.

    ~Kelvin

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  2. VictoriaMay 30, 2011 at 10:23 PM

    Powerful poem, Gaurang. The ocean at times both attracts and repels. I see you grow as a poet all the time.

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  3. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 1:27 AM

    Lovely poem encapsulating the beauty and devastating power of the sea

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMay 31, 2011 at 1:58 AM

    powerful showcase of the anger of God.
    thanks for linking.

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  5. mindsingerMay 31, 2011 at 4:42 AM

    I would love to see the sea. Thank you for bringing it near.

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  6. AnonymousMay 31, 2011 at 12:13 PM

    superb and magnificent writing ...

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  7. AnonymousJune 1, 2011 at 1:22 AM

    So sad and true. :(

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