Monday, April 25, 2011

Poem 138 - Dance Along!


Sitting on the couch watching boring television channels
Some showing recipes, others movies and some animals
In one channel an awesome rock song replaces a cartoon
I drum along with the beats, using a fork and a spoon

I wondered what was the secret behind all this music
As the drums beat louder I jump, dance and kick
The T.V along with the music, it shows a video, a horse and a boy
Horse dances with the beats, the boy sits on the horse, like it's a toy

After the song - people clap, the boy and horse do shine
My dog, joins me to see them clap, everything goes fine
The boy seemed to be holding a happy heart
For him and the horse, it was a good dancing career start
-Gaurang Rao

14 comments:

  1. That's a lively poem. It literally jumps out to you. :)

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  2. All we need is the mentioned music and a happy heart, don't you think?
    here is mine:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/04/25/symbolically-speaking/

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  3. Lovely poem...you've incorporated so many memes. I am very impressed! Nicely written.

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  4. A dancing pony and boy...that is a unique take..thank you for posting....bkm

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  5. what a delightful prompt for the TV. I am glad that I finally got around to visiting you from Theme Thursday

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  6. Amazing Poem and nice blog too...
    You create beautiful visuals with words

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  7. Love the phrase:"the boy seems to be holding a happy heart"
    Thank you for sharing!
    On Paper Wings

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  8. love this one,
    playfully beautiful.
    A++

    :)

    See you on Sunday again.

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