Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Poem 257 - Unexpected Visitors

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An old storage room
Covered in some years of dust
Natures hiding place

A strong musty smell
Unexpected visitors
Hanging on the shelves

Nocturnal mammals
Fly out in a colony
Enchanting black eyes
~Gaurang Rao

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8 comments:

  1. NankaAugust 29, 2013 at 4:53 PM

    You have captured the bats well in the three set haiku Gaurang!!

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  2. GaurangAugust 29, 2013 at 5:49 PM

    Thank You Nanka!

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  3. Jasline MenezesAugust 29, 2013 at 6:21 PM

    A cold and dark haiku... i like it! Keep it up! :)

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  4. GaurangAugust 29, 2013 at 9:59 PM

    Thanks Jasline Menezes!

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  5. alice keysAugust 29, 2013 at 11:10 PM

    YUK! About finding the bats. Lovely poetry.

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  6. GaurangAugust 30, 2013 at 1:02 AM

    Thank you Alice Keys!

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  7. Sumana RoyAugust 30, 2013 at 5:59 PM

    an eerie room with mysterious nocturnal visitors... nicely written

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  8. GaurangAugust 31, 2013 at 11:30 AM

    Thanks Sumana Roy!

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