Sunday, June 30, 2013

Poem 243 - My Imaginary Island



Wouldn't it be fun, to have an island of my own
Where I'm as free as a bird and where happy memories are grown
A place I would like to call, my very own nation
A beautiful place where people would want to spend a vacation
A fun place, where my wild ideas are put in action, not just kept in words
A calm place, where you can here the melodious songs of birds
A wonderful place, from which you would not want to retreat
A place, where all good things you will meet
A peaceful place, where there are no worries, no crime
A joyful place where you would like to spend all of your time
A happy place, where you would enjoy the sunset
A free place, where you could keep a lizard or even a bear as a pet
A place where you know there are no ghosts crawling
A tension free place, where there's no fear of  bridges falling
~Gaurang Rao

Sunday whirl words used - Island, birds, retreat, wild, bridges, bear, falling (changed the tense of fallen)
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14 comments:

  1. Stan SkiJune 30, 2013 at 1:18 PM

    Wonderful imagination... One day you'll be there...

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  2. GaurangJune 30, 2013 at 1:26 PM

    Thanks Stan Ski!! :)

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  3. veronica balfour paulJune 30, 2013 at 1:43 PM

    Sounds like a happy place. Can I come, too?!

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  4. GaurangJune 30, 2013 at 2:05 PM

    Feel free to! :)

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  5. NankaJune 30, 2013 at 2:23 PM

    Great going Gaurang and wish you the best to be there one day!! Sounds like Dr Vijay Mallya's song today!! ;)

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  6. GaurangJune 30, 2013 at 5:22 PM

    Haha! Thanks for your comment! :)

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  7. wabi sabiJune 30, 2013 at 5:54 PM

    You have this special place already...in your imagination!! Lovely! Tanka Whirl

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  8. brenda wJune 30, 2013 at 6:24 PM

    Your words paint a glorious picture of a beautiful place. Thank you for writing with us at The Sunday Whirl.

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  9. pamelaJuly 1, 2013 at 3:49 AM

    I echo the others, you have a wonderful imagination, Gaurang. Are you really only in the 9th grade? If so, you have quite a bright future as a writer.


    Pamela

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  10. veronica_rothJuly 1, 2013 at 6:52 AM

    Hi little man. Love this just as much as your last whirl. Sometimes, as I'm driving past the harbour islands here on the West Coast, I wonder if there are any islands still available to own. It would be wonderful, wouldn't it? Nicely whirled, :) Keep writing and one day that island will be yours.

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  11. GaurangJuly 1, 2013 at 4:19 PM

    Thanks Wabi Sabi!

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  12. GaurangJuly 1, 2013 at 4:20 PM

    Yep, in 9th. Thanks for your comment here!

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  13. GaurangJuly 1, 2013 at 4:20 PM

    Thank you Veronica Roth!

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  14. GaurangJuly 1, 2013 at 4:23 PM

    Thanks Brenda and it's my pleasure!

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