Thursday, June 9, 2011

Poem 154 - The Silly Servant

Servant doing hard work, because of the glass eye of his boss
He always took it out and kept it were the servant was
Boss told "I am keeping an eye on you"
Servant believed boss, and did hard work too
When servant's friend heard this and laughed, servant got cross
-Gaurang Rao


  1. This was a tough prompt...nice take!

  2. Nice Magpie! Maybe he got "cross eyed"? lol!

  3. I bet he did! Good stuff Gaurang.

    Anna :o]

  4. very creatively written
    Loved it !!!

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  6. Very amusing =)

  7. ...very nice Gaurang... i like the humor behind...great day.(:


  8. very interesting .. keep posting more :)


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