Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Poem 185 - The boat of life


As the boat of life goes on, every person grows
We learn something every day
The boat of life might have a few problems
But it fights till the last piece of wood, breaks away

The boat of life teaches us things that might be good
But you can't tell if the boat of life is taking you in the right way
The boat of life might have to face a few storms
But still it takes them as a challenge, and alive it does stay

So, why not like this boat
Take every problem like a challenge
And learn to respect and forgive
Instead of taking revenge
-Gaurang Rao
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3 comments:

  1. Wayne PitchkoDecember 16, 2011 at 9:47 AM

    i like what you did with this prompt....nicely done and thanks for sharing

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  2. Jingle Poetry At Olive GardenDecember 20, 2011 at 12:41 PM

    lovely sentiments, well put.

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  3. vandramDecember 27, 2011 at 1:27 PM

    well written - great maturity in your words - am sure you are as mature in real life :)

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