Nature's softness felt
Barefoot, I run on the sand
They stick to my feet
Beautiful imprint
Of my footprints on the sand
Waves wash them away
~Gaurang Rao
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Wonderful, Gaurang! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteyes, we are only here for a blink, or a wave!
ReplyDeleteAnd yet those tiny fleeting moments can be among the best!Tanka Whirl
ReplyDeleteI love the photo that goes with your haikus! how fabulous that you are so into writing! keep at it.
ReplyDeletea retired teacher
...and someday the Great Wave will wash us away too...
ReplyDeleteWaiting
for White Shirts
I really like the second one. I think footprints are beautiful in the sand!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
ReplyDeleteThanks Reading Pleasure. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Maggie Grace!
ReplyDelete:) Yes it will! But we'll manage to get back :D.
ReplyDeleteThanks Nonnie!
ReplyDeleteThanks Wabi Sabi!
ReplyDeleteBoth probably! :D
ReplyDeleteThese are a treasure =)
ReplyDeleteLove the softness of dry sand and the deep imprints on wet sand!! Nice Gaurang!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nanka! :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, especially the second one
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I love the imagery.
ReplyDeleteI almost saw you running happily on the sands... and the waves washing it away!!!
ReplyDeleteNice one
http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/07/dreams-washed-out.html
oh the precious memories you evoke from my ocean embraced childhood,
ReplyDeletethank you!
Thanks Björn!
ReplyDeleteThank You!
ReplyDeleteThanks Locomente!
ReplyDeleteHaha! Its my pleasure to write, thanks for your comment!
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