Friday, July 5, 2013

Poem 249 - Sandy Legs


Nature's softness felt
Barefoot, I run on the sand
They stick to my feet

Beautiful imprint
Of my footprints on the sand
Waves wash them away
~Gaurang Rao

26 comments:

  1. Wonderful, Gaurang! Keep it up!

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  2. Reading PleasureJuly 5, 2013 at 10:04 PM

    Beautiful

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  3. Joanne Moceri-TaveiraJuly 5, 2013 at 10:38 PM

    yes, we are only here for a blink, or a wave!

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  4. And yet those tiny fleeting moments can be among the best!Tanka Whirl

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  5. I love the photo that goes with your haikus! how fabulous that you are so into writing! keep at it.
    a retired teacher

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  6. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 6, 2013 at 4:44 AM

    ...and someday the Great Wave will wash us away too...

    Waiting
    for White Shirts

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  7. I really like the second one. I think footprints are beautiful in the sand!

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  8. :) Yes it will! But we'll manage to get back :D.

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  9. Candice Alishia DaoudJuly 6, 2013 at 1:00 PM

    These are a treasure =)

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  10. Love the softness of dry sand and the deep imprints on wet sand!! Nice Gaurang!!

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  11. Beautiful, especially the second one
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  12. I love the imagery.

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  13. I almost saw you running happily on the sands... and the waves washing it away!!!


    Nice one

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/07/dreams-washed-out.html

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  14. oh the precious memories you evoke from my ocean embraced childhood,
    thank you!

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  15. Haha! Its my pleasure to write, thanks for your comment!

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