Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Poem 206 - The Soup

My shoes were wet and muddy, after walking in the rain
I went into a diner, for my stomach was crying in vain
Red hot soup, arrived on the dinner table
The waiter placed it, it shook, then it was stable
A red hot tomato soup, with bread pieces in it, I took a sip
The soup too hot, burnt my throat and lip
But it felt good, on a cold, wet and rainy night
And into a bread piece I took a bite
Thanks dear soup for making me warm
Don't you think it's nice to drink when its raining, or during a storm?
~Gaurang Rao

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  1. Oh yes, soup is definitely great on a cold rainy, or stormy day. My hubby made a big pot of vegetable beef soup for dinner last night. It was really nice of him since I think it was the first time he made soup. And it tasted really good too. Maybe he will make it more often now that he knows how. And I love Tomato Soup.

    I enjoyed your poem very much and like how you told us about your soup. It really sounded like a great day for soup and some nice bread. I love bread and soup.

    Thanks ever so much for sharing such a nice soup poem with us for this weeks Theme Thursday.

    God bless.

  2. Ashwini and VandanaNovember 14, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    Very nice poem...made us very hungry! ;)

    You make us proud gaurang,really! :)


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